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I need critisism
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I''ve written a track in Cubase, and i want to hear your comments about it. Especially what i can improve/change. Basically i want to know what you don''t like with it and that i can change (apart from the abrupt ending, but ignore that one).
http://ffasylum.com/~ganryu/audio/Carnival.mp3
Just a note:
The track is meant to sound a little "creepy" too... Perhaps i should emphasize that somehow...
I think it sounds very nice. Like the intro organ. Gives it kinda freakshow/circus feeling.
Maybe you should try pan the sounds some more. Make it a bit more wide.
This can help to make it sound more realistic: http://www.dsokids.com/1/seating.html
You can find better seating charts. This was just the first one I found when I did a google search.
One thing that made me improve alot was when I started using the mod wheel for expression/volume changes.
Maybe you should try pan the sounds some more. Make it a bit more wide.
This can help to make it sound more realistic: http://www.dsokids.com/1/seating.html
You can find better seating charts. This was just the first one I found when I did a google search.
One thing that made me improve alot was when I started using the mod wheel for expression/volume changes.
Hi there, I''ll be rough here..
I love the beginning, but around 22sec I don''t like the clashing cymbals and the whole song becomming so orchestral and moving away from the circus organ focus. It''s starting to become a little egyptian in places too.
This piece would suit a dark twisted circus. If I was to use this in a game I''d concentrate more heavily on extending the solo organ part, and if you provide the orchestral backing, then keep the organ dominant and fade / filter the orchestra into the background.
Perhaps using some flutes as fills or to work around the main organ melody like a snake.
Add some crowd samples too to give it some more ambience.
Other than the bit of nitpicking, it''s got great potential!
Audio Artist
www.GroovyAudio.com
I love the beginning, but around 22sec I don''t like the clashing cymbals and the whole song becomming so orchestral and moving away from the circus organ focus. It''s starting to become a little egyptian in places too.
This piece would suit a dark twisted circus. If I was to use this in a game I''d concentrate more heavily on extending the solo organ part, and if you provide the orchestral backing, then keep the organ dominant and fade / filter the orchestra into the background.
Perhaps using some flutes as fills or to work around the main organ melody like a snake.
Add some crowd samples too to give it some more ambience.
Other than the bit of nitpicking, it''s got great potential!
Audio Artist
www.GroovyAudio.com
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