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Not a game story, but game-related
Apologies in advance for the crosspost, but I want to briefly plug this story I wrote, given that many of you don''t visit the lounge.
In particular, using this thread as a place to critique my writing skills would be appreciated. I''m looking to improve.
Superpig
- saving pigs from untimely fates, and when he''s not doing that, runs The Binary Refinery.
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Self-insertions are in general a bad idea, but you have a good writing style. I''d like to see more of your work.
quote: Original post by Tom
Self-insertions are in general a bad idea
Understood. I wasn''t entirely sure who else I could use as the hero of the story, though - short of making up a fictional character, and I managed to base all characters on existing people (or cyberpeople).
quote: I''d like to see more of your work.
There''s a short story I wrote as part of an article on writing at my old site which you might like, then.
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As for the rest of my work... eh. Maybe I''ll dig out my story ''Fear of Spiders Runs in the Family...'' that one was popular
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Superpig
- saving pigs from untimely fates, and when he''s not doing that, runs The Binary Refinery.
Fear of Spiders Runs in the Family
It''s a couple of years old, but still one of my favourite pieces of work.
Superpig
- saving pigs from untimely fates, and when he''s not doing that, runs The Binary Refinery.
It''s a couple of years old, but still one of my favourite pieces of work.
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Superpig
- saving pigs from untimely fates, and when he''s not doing that, runs The Binary Refinery.
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